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Trapped feelings - hydextetsu - NC-17 (Part two)

Challenge: 30 kisses
Theme: #26: if only I could make you mine

Title: Trapped feelings
Part: 2
Pairing: hydextetsu
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Angst, romance
Summary: When feelings of more than ten years are trapped physically, is it enough to break the mental walls that hold them back?
Author's note: The concept of this fic began from an idea told to me by my 'sister' Ami-chan. Between the two of us, we moulded and worked at the idea until it became what it is now. A couple of the quotes in there actually came directly from her, too. I obviously couldn't have written it without her help and psychological guidance (rofl). Thankyou, ne. ^__^

http://inkdrops.inkified.com/?p=21
Tags: 30 kisses, angst, fandom: l'arc~en~ciel, hydextetsu, romance, trapped feelings

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[info]nekoyuki

July 20 2005, 13:03:55 UTC 6 years ago

OMG part 2! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!
*grabs the fic*

...
sounds like a crazy fangirl I am XD
more comments after reading it~ *giggles*

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:00:36 UTC 6 years ago

What? You're _not_ a crazy fangirl? *giggles*

[info]nekoyuki

6 years ago

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[info]nekoyuki

6 years ago

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[info]nekochan23

July 20 2005, 13:24:16 UTC 6 years ago

Hics... so sad...

But I'm glad your post it fast enough, so my curiousity for waiting were pay fair. Hehehe... More! More! More!

Chicken hair? You mean in Killing Me ? And I just read the doujin about it. Hahaha, such coincident.

So what it Tet-Chan dress as a girl. He kawaii enough. And I'm very much like it. Huh, bad Doiha! What about he looks in Blurry Eyes ! XP

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:07:09 UTC 6 years ago

Heh, I only posted so fast because it was already half-done by the time I posted part one. Hopefully I'm able to finish part three quickly. ^__^

*nods* hai, the infamous Killing Me chicken hair. And... you read a doujin? Where did you find this doujin? -___- *needs haitsu doujin and can't find ANY*

*giggles* Hyde's ignoring his own girlish outings. He's just being a jerk, really.

[info]nekochan23

6 years ago

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[info]gacktangel

July 20 2005, 13:26:24 UTC 6 years ago

Hyde is so evil! *stab him* >=( Poor Tetsu ;-; i hope it'll get better for them *hinthint*
The end is sweet n_n

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:11:51 UTC 6 years ago

*cuddles* The beginning of the next part is shocking~.

[info]gacktangel

6 years ago

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[info]nekochan23

July 20 2005, 14:31:22 UTC 6 years ago

Sorry, one question. Who is Hakuei?

[info]musical_notes

July 20 2005, 15:45:39 UTC 6 years ago

From the band.. Penicillin, if I remember correctly. ^^

[info]jyojyoushi

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[info]musical_notes

July 20 2005, 14:48:35 UTC 6 years ago

♥ Moooore~ I beg with uttermost humbleness, more!

Last part, I wanted to cry. This part, I can't believe how utterly juvenile their taunting is. XD

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:14:32 UTC 6 years ago

*grins* Oh yeah. I enjoyed writing this part like you would not _believe_. :P

[info]fenery

July 20 2005, 16:02:48 UTC 6 years ago

I likes, more please~ ^_^

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:17:02 UTC 6 years ago

^___^ Will do~.

[info]theskyiscrying

July 20 2005, 16:42:13 UTC 6 years ago

AHHHH!

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:17:41 UTC 6 years ago

*pokes you* and "AHHHH!" means...?

[info]theskyiscrying

6 years ago

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[info]msclairvoyant

July 20 2005, 16:55:40 UTC 6 years ago

I LOVE this fic! :D

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:23:29 UTC 6 years ago

*grins* You do~?

[info]bulgocrazyi

July 20 2005, 17:03:49 UTC 6 years ago

“Which is, by the way, an infinitely better solo pursuit than making gangster movies with the queen of all whores himself.”


But he is a cute queen of whores, *lip trembles* XDDD
I loved it! :)


[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:29:32 UTC 6 years ago

*laughs* Everyone mentions _that_ insult; I personally liked 'plastic-faced phoney' better, LOL.

And don't worry. I'm a Gackt fangirl through and through. Tetsu was just mad. ^__^

[info]bulgocrazyi

6 years ago

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[info]realfolkblues

July 21 2005, 00:39:12 UTC 6 years ago

omg LOVE!! ♥ omgomgomgomgomg I love this fic so much!! (I just typed "fuc")

♥♥♥

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:32:13 UTC 6 years ago

LOL I make that mistake a lot too. Glad you're enjoying though~!

[info]lordstarfish

July 21 2005, 01:46:10 UTC 6 years ago

Goodness, they're like a couple of bickering gradeschoolers ^.^ And Hyde just keeps getting more and more pathetic~ I liked the bit about the wedding and Hyde staring though -- and that was really clever at the end, turning Hyde's lame insult into a really sad moment for tetsu ;__; Fabulous, stupendous, wonderful work [per usual] Can't wait for more!

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:36:01 UTC 6 years ago

*grins* and have I mentioned yet that I love the way you comment? ^^

Definitely more on the way~~!

[info]pneumatique

July 21 2005, 05:00:59 UTC 6 years ago

...I love your asshole!Hyde, too. He's such an angry little boy. :D

If I may ask, about how many parts (XD typed 'parrots' by accident) is this baby gonna be? I enjoy knowing these things. It's my obsessive-compulsive side showing through. x.o

*joins the "more! more! more!" chant*

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:39:22 UTC 6 years ago

He is indeed angry, ne. ^^

This fic is going to have three parrots. Possibly four, depending on how long (or should I say noisy? XD) the third parrot gets. ^___^

*is astonished by all these people chanting at me* Jesus, what am I? J.K.?~ LOL.

[info]taylormercury

July 21 2005, 05:20:10 UTC 6 years ago

O___O the arguing makes me sad! I hate arguments. But ... some of the comments they threw at each other was pretty amusing (Hyde calling Tetsu gay, for one XD)

This was another excellent part!! Your writing .... gah!! The dialogue between the two in this was equally excellent of last time (which I did not mention. Bad Mica!) And .. ooh there seems to be progress with Hyde here, that last line! Finally he says something!! I feel so bad for poor Tetsu! *cuddles him*

I'm looking forward to part three! This is turning out wonderfully!!!

[info]jyojyoushi

July 21 2005, 13:43:23 UTC 6 years ago

*giggles* I know. The whole point of the argument situation was for it to turn stupid at some point, because that's exactly what arguments do in real life. Before you know it you're arguing about something completely off-the-wall. Like tetsu and hyde did I mean...... snoring?!

Hai, there is indeed progress. After ten years and more. -_- Stupid hyde. He bothers me in this fic, lol. That's a first. ^^

Part three will be coming as soon as I can write it, haha.

[info]taylormercury

6 years ago

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[info]kagome_angel

July 21 2005, 14:57:46 UTC 6 years ago

My gosh they're so mean to each other what with all the yelling and the name-calling and Hyde constantly shoving Tetsu away and making him feel like shit. ^^

But I like the feel of the last bit of this part~~~~.

Wonderful, as always. ^_^

[info]jyojyoushi

July 22 2005, 12:45:59 UTC 6 years ago

*grins* Yeah~ maybe it'll get better. Then again maybe not~. *evil grinning*

[info]vampire_kiki

July 25 2005, 14:47:42 UTC 6 years ago

wow, it's priceless. i never realize tetsu and hyde could hv so many issues to fight about when there are obviously so many of them!u widen my sight!!!XDDd

[info]jyojyoushi

July 26 2005, 15:44:45 UTC 6 years ago

>.> Some of them were very _stupid_ issues though.

[info]vampire_kiki

6 years ago

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[info]chani_saint

July 28 2005, 15:57:26 UTC 6 years ago

oh my i cant wait till part 3! your work is love man!

[info]jyojyoushi

July 29 2005, 12:24:57 UTC 6 years ago

My work is love? Lol it almost needs a colorbar of its own.

[info]chani_saint

6 years ago

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[info]__stickyrice

July 29 2005, 04:11:36 UTC 6 years ago

awwww, Hyde does have another side to him xD

[info]jyojyoushi

July 29 2005, 12:17:16 UTC 6 years ago

Are you sure? *grins*

[info]onegreysunrise

July 31 2005, 21:00:40 UTC 6 years ago

My god, they're like third-graders! Except, infinitely more hurtful.
=wants to grab and shake them=
I love this fic, and I will be waiting deperately for further parts, so, I'm going to friend you.

[info]jyojyoushi

August 1 2005, 13:27:09 UTC 6 years ago

*grins* Sure, no problem. *adds you back of course*
I think this just might be the best haitsu I've written, despite everyone saying that 'Glimmer' is the best haitsu _ever_. LOL a lot of people have said that but I still like this one. :P

They're great, aren't they~.

[info]hotanimechick

August 3 2005, 03:51:16 UTC 6 years ago

;_; I loved it. I probably should've commented earlier though ^-^;;
I am also going to friend you, because you are just to awesome not to friend :D

[info]jyojyoushi

August 18 2005, 13:14:32 UTC 6 years ago

Well. Awesomeness. Thankyou very much. ^_^ There's more definitely on the way now.

[info]hotanimechick

6 years ago

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[info]2b_nika

August 11 2005, 19:10:33 UTC 6 years ago

Hi!!!!!!! Ohhhh How can you be so cruel!!!??? How I’m supposed to get sleep now?? >_< continue it soon pleeeeease~~~ Now being serious, it’s really a good place to finish the chapter but you have to admit that is a bit too cruel for us...

Well about the story since when I write something I love that people comment it,here is my opinion ^^: The dialogues are just amazing really and the characters are fantastic, I explain myself... when writing something people usually make plain dialogues, but in this story it shows clearly human contradictions, Hyde and Tetsu saying things obviously they didn’t mean or just making horrible excuses just to avoid the truth and the fact that they are wrong ... ^^ they are so lovely <3

and finally...well... the writings is...just fantastic! really I don’t know where do you get the ideas from but I love your description of gackt really much ^^ and the word fight between Hyde and Tetsu in general.... the end of chapter two is so sweet~~ looking forward to read chapter three!

(PD: sorry for my poor English, it’s just a spanish girl trying to explain herself)

[info]jyojyoushi

August 18 2005, 13:22:01 UTC 6 years ago

*laughs* Yeah, it's been almost a month since I posted this part, hasn't it? I'm sorry, lol. I've been so busy. Part three is well underway, however. Coming soon to an LJ near you and all that.

*giggles* That was the point, actually. Ami-chan and I were talking about arguments and how /stupid/ they get as they go along, and thus it was decided that the argument in this fic should be much the same. It makes them very human, don't you think? I was glad you could see that. :D

As a fan of Gackt even I love my description of him. *snort*

[info]2b_nika

6 years ago

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[info]xmayblelaterx

August 16 2005, 01:14:51 UTC 6 years ago

Gah....stupid Hyde. Why don't you stop being such an ass and just jump on Tet-chan already?????

Two greatest lines ever:
“Oh, that’s a low blow, especially coming from the man who is, in all practicality, his wife’s wife.”

And...
“Says the newest member of Morning Musume.”

Seriously...that last one had me rolling around in my chair. So funny.
NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED MORE!!!!! I must must must must must know what happens NOW! Even though I have the sneaking suspicion that some elevator-sex is about to occur. *crosses fingers* ^__~

[info]jyojyoushi

August 18 2005, 13:26:27 UTC 6 years ago

*giggles* That Morning Musume line was Ami-chan's, the girl is an honest genius. XD

There's more coming very soon. And I think EVERYONE thinks that there'll be elevator sex. Haha.

[info]chani_saint

August 19 2005, 03:04:10 UTC 6 years ago

OH nevermind i found it lol

[info]nikka69

May 25 2006, 09:27:51 UTC 6 years ago

Damn hyde saying “Then shut the fuck up for a little while.” to someone you care? How can he afford to say that? >,<
And this is funny “Which is, by the way, an infinitely better solo pursuit than making gangster movies with the queen of all whores himself.” HAHA XD
And haha they are sooo childish in this one XP

“Well……… at least I don’t snore!” <-- totally OT! X3

But aww.. at least he tried to say something worthwhile in the end =p


[info]jyojyoushi

May 25 2006, 11:25:06 UTC 6 years ago

*giggles* hyde is terrible. He really is. He pisses me off in this but he really does love tetsu so I can't help but forgive him.

[info]eruthiadwen

March 3 2007, 06:33:37 UTC 5 years ago

Ouch.

I was googling for random slash and came across your LJ. Am I ever glad I did.

I don't even know who these people are, but ouch, I'm pretty sure my heart just broke a little. >_<

You're one amazing writer. The feelings come off the page so clearly, and damn it hurts. Silly boys fighting and throwing insults and being afraid of feelings. XD

-progresses to next chapter- :D

PS. I was logged into the wrong journal for my other comment. This journal is the one I use to peruse the slash world with. Hur hur hur. XD

Once again, wow. This is awesome. Pain-filled and twisted and hurtful, but awesome.

[info]jyojyoushi

April 22 2007, 13:21:11 UTC 5 years ago

My apologies! I went through a stage of having e-mail trouble and so somehow I managed to completely miss your comment until searching through my journal and editing various entries.

So... thankyou! I'm glad you enjoyed...
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